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Open Poetry #19

Your Journey

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-02-19 01:04 AM

Your Journey

Welcome Home My Love
Take off your boots
Let me rub your feet
You must be tired
From your journey far

I've got moisture for your lips
taisty tid-bits for you to eat
Lay your head upon my breast
Let your body have its rest

For we have time now
An eternitiy

Connie McDonald
Copyright@2000

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-02-19 01:17 AM

I loved this one... and I can see why you were attracted to mine.... "Welcome home" it starts.... {laughing} this is a haunting, question raising poem... why and eternity the reader must ask themselves....
Well Done!!!

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry Gardner

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (02-19-2002 01:19 AM).]

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