Love's Light......Triple Tanka

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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-02-18 11:16 PM

Love's Light
Triple Tanka

Waterfalls of sighs
flow within heartbeats in melt
ardent eyes entice
the birdsong of paradise
to drink of Cupid's nectar

The sun drips honey
to adorn with passion's gown
drizzling down roused curves
fiery tongues trace mango sky
as we lick the light of love

Sangria sipped lips
kiss night of luminescence
stars shine through entwine
in your arms, I am goddess
at play in Luna's hammock

By Melissa P. Monette

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2002-02-18 11:41 PM

WOW! I have missed your incredible love poetry. These are so sensually romantic. Yum. And that picture is tasty.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-18-2002 11:42 PM).]

rosepetals25

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2 posted 2002-02-18 11:48 PM

Missy,

I always love your poems

You write romance so wonderfully

And the pic is nice too

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2002-02-18 11:51 PM

"Waterfalls of sighs
flow within heartbeats in melt"

how completely gorgeous!!

love these!!

Temptress

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4 posted 2002-02-18 11:52 PM

This is simply beautiful.

Good to see you Melissa.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

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5 posted 2002-02-19 03:56 PM

wow. . . simply stunning. . . the Queen of Romance takes another turn. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-19 04:04 PM

Beautiful Melissa! And the picture makes it even more enchanting. Very well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Mistletoe Angel

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7 posted 2002-02-19 04:59 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I love that vision of Luna's hammock, this is beautiful! (kiss on cheek) May you forever be showered in love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-02-19 05:02 PM

Triple the delight!
I love it!
BRAVA!
Wonderfully sensuous work!
Wow!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2002-02-19 05:30 PM

Hello Melissa

Stunning images here filled with love and longing.......beautiful!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

RSWells
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10 posted 2002-02-19 06:56 PM

Very sensuous indeed. Enjoyed

strbbux
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11 posted 2002-02-19 07:05 PM

This is totally beautiful Melissa. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-02-19 09:38 PM

Melissa, I always love to read your work, be it happy or sad. This sounds like you have forgiven Eros his previous mistakes.
Th last stanza especially, delicious.
Sandra

Mysteria

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13 posted 2002-02-19 10:17 PM

Boy, you have that romance down pat I will say that! Beautiful Melissa.

Live today like it was your last day on earth!
~* I don't know who said it but they were sure right *~

vandana

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14 posted 2002-02-20 02:11 PM

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-02-20 02:44 PM

Melissa,
Lovely, always enjoyed reading your poetry.

Dennis L. White
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16 posted 2002-02-21 10:57 AM

Melissa,
Is this triple Tanka the three play before the foreplay? Just Joking! These are delightful! Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

17 posted 2002-02-22 01:00 AM

Melissa-
Absolutely gorgeous!
Beautiful and romantic...I love it.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

18 posted 2002-02-22 02:31 PM

beautiful triple, love the image within.

Charisma

Chelsea~
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19 posted 2002-02-24 12:44 PM

missy

wow! this is beautiful!

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