Open Poetry #19 |
Your Kiss |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Your Kiss Your breath washing over me Moments before your warm lips Meet mine with velvet softness Moving with graceful temptation Drawing me into your want Our souls swirl together as one Our tongues meeting in dance Slowly stroking the desires Of the passion that lies beneath. As I lose myself in your seduction. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (02-18-2002 01:50 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
girl, this is so sensual..... love it |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Delicious! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is yummy! LOL Nice work, Tara *hugs* Michael Auguste~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara...you cannot get much more passionate than this without getting bumped over to the other place...this is sensuous and very warm... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like a kiss to remember...James |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
awwwww, this is great. Keep up the good work. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I'm glad you all like it Thanks for stopping in to read. Tara |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a soft and sensual treasure from your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) May he forever shower your heart with kisses, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - Ok, this is a pretty descriptive kiss. So, pucker up.... BC |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Yup...just about sums up my wife's lips!!!You have penned the perfect kiss Rosepetals25 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a kiss! This is so awesome. You go girl You just keep getting better and better with your poetry...love inspires you well! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all for stopping in I'm so glad you enjoyed Tara |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
well woohoo can i have another? -Dave |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this poem. |
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