Open Poetry #19 |
. . . Driven by Fear . . . |
ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
This I say of the moon's impoverished face: pocked and mottled from countless collisions- How does a dead stone shine with star's grace yet is hushed by night and day's divisions? Why, we wonder, would a man turn the cheek When suffering occurs to a countless meek dubious grim facades of the Never-thirsty Blanched, parched souls search for angels of mercy Ready to lay down - a victim of blood tears Not motivated by hunger, but driven by fear Barely can they breathe - mocked as they stand Smote and erased by the unforgiving hand But for the grace of the stout and brave Justice could not hold a nobler sword As aggressors shall fall to their knees By lucidity of the mighty Word ~~ ~~ ~~ (c) 2002 Picasso Lyrics [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (04-07-2002 06:07 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! This is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, justice will be served always and fear will come to those who try and oppress those who are righteous and mighty of word and heart! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-07-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Remarkable!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
As aggressors shall fall to their knees By lucidity of the mighty Word Its amazing how powerful words are, Jeff... and so many people don't even realize that words are the most powerful weapons we have. a great write ~a wordy hug~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i must echo the others, this is remarkable! thanks for sharing!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The roar of the lion here written, in a quiet riot...Very inspiring and thoughtful work. ThisDiamond |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed reading this, Shadow Rider... beautifully written! ~Tier |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
It is true, sometimes the Word is mightier than any sword, I loved the way you wrote this one baby! |
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