In Dark Of Night Take To Flight (duet with muse)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-18 01:45 PM

Into the dark of most evil light
Solitary man doth take the fight
for thy words of rhyme do feed
and bring forth to thee a need.

    For thy seeking white of right
    solitary man, take thy light
    for a candle one would heed
    the brilliance within thy lonesome deed

Mine heart and soul must feel
upon the meadow of love's field
the words of the maid most fair
are said sure and with a flair.

    For one would speak naught but true
    as potions one pours within a brew
    for courage, Sire, be yours in mind
    and heart! Sire, I give thee mine

Against the flow of the page
I leave alone as your sage
and in thy words I do rely
for tis thy words I see...I sigh.

    In darkest night 'twould seek my write
    against candle's gleam against dark, fight
    for beyond the pale, seek thy gleam
    and no, 'tis naught, 'tis naught but dream

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-02-18 01:56 PM

I have written duets before as well, and sometimes things just "click" with that partner, and it just flows and meshes together, and this appears to have happened here. (Great feeling, isn't it?

)

This is seamless, and a classical flair to it--as though written for the stage. Wonderful.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-02-18 02:01 PM

What Serenity says...part the curtains, let the play continue...

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-02-18 02:21 PM

Perfection!!! Don't change a thing!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-18 02:26 PM

...Perfect!!...

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-02-18 03:19 PM

Yes...I must agree...when two people have
similar styles...it can click...as this
seems to have. I have a worthy muse who
rose to the occasion well...

Thank you Nancy, Karilea, Serenity and
Amusemi for your warm remarks...

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-02-18 06:32 PM

Just Beautiful Magnus
" For one would speak naught but true
    as potions one pours within a brew
    for courage, Sire, be yours in mind
    and heart! Sire, I give thee min"
Love your words and how you presented them.
floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-18 06:42 PM

WOW!!!This is magnificent...You two did click perfectly...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-18 06:42 PM

BRAVO!!! Wow, this is wonderful, dearest friend, I too always love to write my thoughts out at night when I feel depressed or if there is a question just hovering over my head! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-02-18 07:03 PM

Barry - written as one, read as one, great write you have here...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-02-18 08:38 PM

BC and everyone..thanx...but my muse deserves
half of the credit...

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