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Two Lives |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Two Lives I say to you I live two lives. I live two lives and have two wives. One for the flower of my mind And one of a physical bind A spirit lies within my bones With silver notes and overtones With gold and blue and azure sky That lifts me up to heavens lie. She reins the essence of my need The very staunch that stops my bleed Tends my wounds and sets the air She is a love that I would dare. She is the yin of the yang The soul of the bell when rang The golden notes that harp my hope The very mainstay of my cope She’s half finality of sane And half the kingdom I would reign. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy OH MY this is so amazing, a simply stunning example of your craft, I think it’s beautiful, the rhyme is divine, the flow simply exquisite and as always the content is utterly utterly fabulous. This is truly one of your utter utter best. Stunning piece of writing from you, utterly outstanding. How smoothly this flows over my soul, like a crystal stream of light, bathing my eyes in delight and falling into me in pools of liquid Oh! YOU know I really love this don’t you? Of course   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Both sides of my face are smiling over this one.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Just steped out of a shower and here you are giving me a bubble bath.   Sunshine, Now that is a complete reply. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love the rhyme here...and *sigh* this is beautiful  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
One for the flower of my mind And one of a physical bind A spirit lies within my bones With silver notes and overtones With gold and blue and azure sky That lifts me up to heavens lie. She reins the essence of my need The very staunch that stops my bleed Tends my wounds and sets the air She is a love that I would dare. ===================================== Yeah...I have to agree with SEA ...*SIGH* "She's half finality of sane And half the kingdom I would reign." Im thinking those are the coolest lines I will read all day  but ya know what I say Stinkylove... Sanity is so over-rated *L* Meet me in Eden...I'll build ya half a throne and put half a crown on your head... we'll have half a cup of tea ... but ALL of infinity is ours *S* *winkiewinkie*  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour my dear boy. I am wondering how many of these you have in you? this is terrific, I love these lines. "She is the yin of the yang The soul of the bell when rang The golden notes that harp my hope The very mainstay of my cope She’s half finality of sane And half the kingdom I would reign." Wow couldnt be any better. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Didn't you know half becomes whole to the soul. WWRSFloria, It is always a pleasure to read your lovely comments. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn, do I understand this...though alot less poetically. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A spirit lies within my bones With silver notes and overtones With gold and blue and azure sky That lifts me up to heavens lie. A beautiful tribute to life and love, Sy... ~lots of weekend hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Now there is a comment that sent me back to read my poem again. Thank you Lyra, Weekend hugs from you are a delight. back. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*bravo*.....love it a lot sey ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, A big for the bravo. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
two words, have I that leap quickly to mind to a poet of worth whosoever was kind Magnificent job! to write such as this when love is confused is it passion or bliss? which loves her more? the heart or the mind? but blessings are prayers still these words were divine!! tSR |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider, My humble thank for an awesome comment. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may you and your love forever share a full life of love together and share the kingdom of happiness forever! (big hugggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the read and glowing comment. |
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