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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-04-05 11:39 AM



More than gray,
I love the darkness
found within your soul.
I wear the black of your pain
to soothe the ache,
absorbing all colors of the rainbow,
so that some day
you shall become renewed
and all that is gold
will flow from your within,
to reach my without.


~M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-04-05 12:12 PM


so that some day
you shall become renewed
and all that is gold
will flow from your within,
to reach my without.


nice turn of phrase..and nice thoughts...


1slick_lady
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2 posted 2002-04-05 12:15 PM


m...damn girl...you can write...and as of late you have been singing all of my songs...helen
Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-04-05 12:39 PM


utterly fabulous!!

((maureen))
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-04-05 12:48 PM


Whoa!
This is really GR8!
Maureen, you go!
          

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5 posted 2002-04-05 01:25 PM


Maureen you are just getting so so good. Now that is true love  of someone, seeing the darkness of pain and be willing to absorb it. Wonderful work girl, keep it up. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-04-05 05:12 PM


C..well I believe that  there is gold in everyone..and I want my share of someone elses to touch mine*s

kidding..
M

Helen...well we must be having the same emotions...thanks *s
M

Newell..glad you enjoyed it!
thanks
M

I.... you  slay me *s

thanks
hugss
M

Floria...I appreciate you thinking so..it makes me feel  that writing and posting is worth it. And yes..True love never  dies...
despite..

*s
Maureen


Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-04-05 09:09 PM


Beautifully written, Maureen

as usual...   ~many hugs~

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Suetang
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8 posted 2002-04-05 09:21 PM


Hello Maureen

This was wonderfully written by a loving hand.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2002-04-05 09:27 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friedn, yes, yes, in time love will heal all wounds and overshadow the darkness with light! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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