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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-04-05 10:54 AM


your words fill my heart
I drown in the limpid pools
of your knowing eyes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2002-04-05 11:16 AM


I see myself there,
here,in the warmth of your eyes
love without disguise

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-04-05 11:20 AM


your words fill my heart
I drown in the limpid pools
of your knowing eyes


my eyes never lie
but change colors when thoughts of...
pull me into yours


*s
M

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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-04-05 11:27 AM



a simple mirror
eyes that see more than they tell
and yet, seeing all

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-04-05 01:00 PM


SEA ~
your visage I see
you fill my eyes and my heart
and my heart gets warm

Maureen ~
no lying eyes here
only truth and longing show
how well you read them

Sunshine ~
my eyes seeing you
taking in the all of you
digesting the you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-04-05 03:07 PM


Like a soft silk stone
I plunge into your eyes ocean
Sighing ripples scatter



(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your words always brighten up my day and grace these pages with love! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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6 posted 2002-04-05 03:14 PM


Bob darling boy this is awesome, truly exceptional writing. So amazing that you convey such grace and style with a seemingly simple word or two. You have such an outstanding gift to write.

You do know I really LOVE this don’t you? I simply cannot do these Senryu things, they are too too hard for me. You however do them perfectly.

Wonderful writing as always

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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displaced
7 posted 2002-04-05 04:06 PM


wow, short and sweet and very well thought out...
my eyes change color too Maureen...it's a gift I think...(to other people to warn them what mood I'm in )

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The Shores of Alone
8 posted 2002-04-05 04:59 PM


Eyes see blind heartache
seek the end of the rainbow
and time will tell which

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USA
9 posted 2002-04-05 05:01 PM


enjoyed
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-04-05 07:01 PM


...OH YES!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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