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Looking Back |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Looking Back She is neither highbrow in her needs nor lowbrow in her desires rather, she takes to the song she heeds the one that tends her fires she tumbles to a lonesome’s weed and bleeds when stuck by briers she is as bare as the plains she travels embracing north, south, east,and west tales of stories she bends to unravel she rises to set only on the best she is the rock that becomes the gravel if only to give you a road to test you catch her touch upon wind’s blow or hear her sigh within your night you wish her soft to go real slow to remember how it’s done so right and she in song of apropos pulls your want way up tight she holds your thought until you gasp ~ or blink ~ holding nothing in your grasp |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
you wish her soft to go real slow to remember how it’s done so right Really liked this poem. Were too many lines to quote all the ones I liked! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh yes Soleil, I do like the mood of this piece... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, sometimes we always need to look over our shoulders and revisit these memories that have shaped our hearts! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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