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Wish You Were There
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Wish You Were There |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Wish You Were There Imaging myself in the eyes of you Wondering just what your mind does view Each time the words caress the feel Of waiting thoughts, of touches real. I sought out sheerness, and found it twice, Tried on its meaning, arresting, nice. Would please, and tease, I... feeling bold. Never thinking age is old. I sought out sheerness, and found each thread, Tempts the mind when shy is shed. "Bolden" not a word when pressed, But that's the feel I felt, possessed. Sassiness is not like me, But adventuresome I try to be. I sought out sheerness, tried its wear. It stood me proud... Wish you were there... ~M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like the play of word and image in this... nicely done! A sensual feel with layers underneath to speak to the mind... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
My intentions exactly...*s to (s)peak the mind M * aren't words fun??? [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-05-2002 09:35 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
it succeeded quite well in doing so.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
C... reminds me of "C"ing is believing... did I spell that correctly? You are so much fun... hugss M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes words are fun.... and as for spelling... now one must be gentle with me on that count...I spell worse than one can imagine. but your verse reminded me of this one.... Alone at last, buttons slip through eyelets to let drop the days garments. Puddled on the floor, at feet now bare, they look so much less like armor… So much more like shimmering robes worn to keep out the cold of others heat. Flesh and emotions bared for all to see, wanting the caress of just another who thinks like me... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wwoooowwwwww...I really love that poem C...both sensual and "tenderly you"...thank you ..you never fail to bring a rise in me... vandana, thank you also for taking the time to read.. hugss M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
oh... better leave that rise line alone I guess as this is a public forum  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes...I think "C" knows best...I definitely do not wish to be moved to adults...thanks *w M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i really enjoyed this M... beautiful poem as for spelling it does count for something yes but it's not everything..meaning means the most! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Amy, thanks..I was in a playful mood thinking about treating myself to a bit of sheerness..wondering if I could get away with it at my age. *s M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another exceptional one from you M. You know i love yours, not trying to be partial, but I can relate so well to you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I sought out sheerness, and found each thread, Tempts the mind when shy is shed. I really love your poetry, Maureen...and this one is very special...  ~many many hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh I love this. I once knew a man who took away all my shyness But now he is gone, and I am back in my shell. Sigh. This is a fun and upliftng write. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Kind of see through, without being trasparent? I liked the look Maureen! You go girl!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is wonderfully passionate, sweet friend, may your heart find pure sheerness and may it always welcome you with loves true gifts! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
passing shadows..I am glad you can relate to me..sometimes I feel no one can understand..I appreciate your reading my words Always, hugss M Lyra...thanks yes, lately I am inspired a bit....perhaps it's thoughts of Spring, not sure...and today..I am feeling soooo much better I just wish to hold onto the moments. many hugsss M Sandra...hmmm well I am still shy but trying to become bolder all the time...even if just for me..to prove I have something worthwhile to share instead of hide. Thanks *s Lori...as see through as one can be without being naked *w and of course..my thoughts are very transparent on this one *s hugss M Noah... Thank you sweet friend *s M |
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