Open Poetry #19 |
ten steps |
haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Sometimes the most remembered moments in life... are the ones most easily forgotten. I give light to my memory of... ten steps one. closer to the unknown, me. two. deeper stilling waves, hello. three. cry of healing patterns, seen. four. whispering inside pleasantries, you. five. nobody relates the melodies, footsteps. six. made genteel by you muted, motion. seven. beyond these ten steps, days. eight. walking the boulevard of friendship, dreamlike. nine. all perceptions lost now, closer. ten. will time repeal all this, again? copyright ©2002 hayden a. james My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This takes more than one read to appreciate the impact...well done Sir...I shall read it again in the morning, in a whole new light... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An excellent adventure, the dance and ritual... Really good. ThisDiamond |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Thank you so much! The experience of this girl is what inspired this all. Hayden My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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