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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-04-04 12:29 PM

promises given
futures grafted together
now sealed with a kiss

Inspired by:Seal With A Kiss

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2002-04-04 12:36 PM

I like the use of the word "grafting"...in this, it makes all the sense in the world...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-04 01:37 PM

Yes, I agree with Deca on the 'grafted' here. Almost like being cemented together...well, no not quite, but you know what I mean.
Good stuff...your the best!
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2002-04-04 01:40 PM

ah this is beautiful said....like it a lot

Charisma

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-04-04 01:50 PM

I love how you do this...reminds me of a time when I shared senryus and haikus with a friend...*s

M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-04 02:45 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is a wonderful poem of friendship, sweet friend, it is almost like putting a thimble on your finger for a promise and swearing by it with all your heart! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-04-04 03:06 PM

Interloper~

This is just lovely....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-04-04 04:31 PM

grafted... two similar but disparate beings becoming one... what a wonderful phrasing!! I like this very much, Interloper!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-04-04 04:40 PM

Interloper - And may the kiss stay with you...

BC

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2002-04-04 05:32 PM

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-04-04 06:54 PM

enjoyed

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

11 posted 2002-04-04 09:01 PM

SWeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!

*smiles*
~Tier

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-04-04 09:07 PM

Nice, but why doesn't it last, after it has been sealed with a kiss??
Sandra

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

13 posted 2002-04-04 10:38 PM

yes, grafting is perfect here....loving this one

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