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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-04-04 11:56 AM

Can’t love any more

you have managed
to wring the last remnant
of life’s love
from what was good

leaving it to slowly
slowly
soak into the earth

in looking back [don’t we all?]
seeing shells of barrenness
knowing to have thought

“don’t let him in…,
he will change your life…”

you did just that ~
bring change…

but don’t all things, good or bad,
change us?

And now, in looking back
over the depiction of
what was just said,

let me rephrase

the

“can’t love any more”

to

can’t love You anymore

although I will
definitely
definitively

and distinctly

love again

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-04-04 12:05 PM

I know this feeling....

well done my friend...and I hope it is not what you are living right now.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-04-04 12:06 PM

his loss another's extreme good fortune.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-04-04 01:23 PM

Hi Deca....yes you will indeed love again!
Love the presentation here as well as the poem. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-04-04 01:27 PM

heartwrenched write.....like the presentation too.

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

5 posted 2002-04-04 01:34 PM

an emotional heart wrenching and heart cleansing piece of writing that I had the pleasure to read. The first stanza was fresh and original.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-04 02:54 PM

(sigh) This is soooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, I know with all my heart you will love again very soon and you will find all the happiness your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) This is outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-04-04 04:47 PM

Decaflame - if I were to write a poem about 'Can't Love Anymore' I would not change one word of yours...

BC

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