Duet With Prof Gloom and deVine

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Open Poetry #19

Duet With Prof Gloom and deVine

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-04-04 10:09 AM

he said he wanted
to write a five seven rhyme
she said she’d do it
writing when she had the time,

styles not the same
he was sure she’d agree
she bent to his will
but only in their poetry

she sat with pencil
scribbled and scrawled with flair
intently writing
choosing each word with great care.

he waits patiently
sitting in his quiet room
thinking deeply of
poetic passion of gloom

she just contemplates
myriad colors of spring,
and the fragrances
that the new blooming will bring

**Thanks PG, had a great time with this!

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (04-04-2002 10:16 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-04-04 10:12 AM

Poet deVine,
And so did I, enjoyed.

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-04-04 10:23 AM

I, too, enjoyed this piece.
Thanx to both of you

Professor Gloom
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of Depression

3 posted 2002-04-04 11:17 AM

I enjoyed it also,
what did it take a week and a half?
I forgot,
which part did I write?

Gloom

Opeth
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The Ravines

4 posted 2002-04-04 11:17 AM

The experiences (which may be considered quirky) of writing a duet were captured well with this writing.

Decaflame
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5 posted 2002-04-04 11:44 AM

Very good!

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2002-04-04 02:12 PM

It's difficult to write with someone you don't really know..this attempt was our first but I hope not the last. I highly recommend this for jumpstarting a quirky muse!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-04-04 09:34 PM

Sharon, it's difficult to write with someone you know too...if their styles are different..you two did a great job..

*s
M

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-04-04 09:41 PM

DeVine Gloom...
How cool can you get! This was great!
ThisDiamond

Martie

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9 posted 2002-04-04 09:52 PM

Much enjoyed, you two!

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