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You're always with me
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You're always with me |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You need not be here for me to love you I can be alone on top of a mountain far away from our home and still you will be in my thoughts I need not be in your arms to feel your skin on my skin Deep within my soul your spirit hides prolonging your presence even when your not around And when the rain comes and finds me by myself I will miss you more each day |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is exactly what I was trying to say, though I was opting for a happier ending.  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And when the rain comes and finds me by myself I will miss you more each day" yes, I love this part....how could I not?! it's perfect  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Walker this is truly incredible....to be alone, to never be without.......you captured it well. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, this is so very sad, I hope love has come to your heart and now you forever sing with the joy of love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
walker, I really like this. You did a wonderful job Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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