Open Poetry #19 |
The note [Marsha/Krissy’s challenge] |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The note [Marsha/Krissy’s challenge] I have a last note, from my mom on a card which I have written of in pages blue which I have kept close, though shared with you it resides in a special place from a special heart this card of mom's, a daily part of life, of love, a heaven's note from high above I take it down every now and then tracing lines that traced a heart how hard it was, sometimes, for her to get past the depth of her love to share her words because I love you’s are said so often sometimes we don’t know their deepest impact… so they go unsaid when we need them most… this last card, it spoke her heart if I were to place it in your hands, you would feel the palpable beat of motherhood still thumping in her note Karilea Rilling Jungel 4 April 2002 remembering April's visit of a decade past |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wiping a tear ....deeply touched by this special note. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very touching and beautifully written Karilea..hugs... ~Victoria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart, OH MY STARS this is without doubt one of your utter best it is utterly wonderful. This poem is absolutely perfect an utterly divine description of how love can live ever on Very well written perfect flow throughout, you are a very very fine poet. But you know that don’t you? As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awwww Sunshine~...this is so lovely and delicate, thank you for sharing... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kari, superbly tender and sensitively rendered, tis wondrous! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooo sensitive and touching, sweet friend, may your heart always envelop those words that she said to you and harvest the heartbeat of her motherhood to you forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautifully heartfelt letter, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karilea, amazing this is. truly wonderful and heartfelt. floria Floria |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sunshine...VERY IMPRESSIVE. What a lovely tribute to the love of your mother. She would be proud. ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, after all the superlatives have been used ...what's left for me to say but 'thank you'. Hugs. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea You touch the remember in me as well as the mother with this tender memory. Beautiful! |
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