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Open Poetry #19

Nothing But The Truth

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-02-18 08:45 AM

The Truth

Life is not
always fun.

Sometimes you
need to accept
the truth...

that not everyone
you fall in love with
will fall in love
with you.

JamesLee
February18
2002

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-18 09:05 AM

Oh James, I so love how you write from the heart, and isn't this the truth. nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

2 posted 2002-02-18 09:13 AM

Although the truth can be painful it's libertating.
Great write!

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

3 posted 2002-02-18 12:25 PM

James - You certainly speak the truth in this one. Nice write.

Dave

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2002-02-18 01:28 PM

James,

This is a truth I found out about. It's not an easy one. Nice write.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-18 01:33 PM

Short, to the point, and painful.
Good write James.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-02-18 02:10 PM

If I could add to this, I would add:

And there is no fault
in that for
either one of you.

I like this James. There are so many simple, but hard truths, you could do a series!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-02-18 08:13 PM

I really HATE this particular truth.
Sandra

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-02-18 09:56 PM

So many truthful replies to your truthful poem, James. See what a just a few words can do?

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

9 posted 2002-02-18 10:27 PM

JamesMichael...Perfectly put. We always wish that if we love someone they will love us back. But your poem expresses the truth about love...sometimes they don't love us back. ***Ivy Rose

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