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Open Poetry #19

Sundown

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-04-03 12:50 PM

Sundown

A big bright
Yellow sun
At the end
Of a very long day
Starting to
Disappear
As it slowly
Drifts away
A beautiful sight
As it goes down
Over the ocean

By Sue 4-2-02

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-04-03 07:10 AM

SmartChick~
Sue ... these are such descriptive thoughts.
You must have seen a lovely 'sundown'~
I love that term~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-03 08:16 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, the sun always glistens in your gorgeous visions and heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!