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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-04-02 10:43 PM


The tinny rasping
of sleet striking glass
comes in frequent waves
shifting about
in the unpredictable wind

As this cadence continues
I turn my neck
until it cracks
to relieve the cold tension
driven into my bones

I look to the floor,
painted in blood
are the last moments
of the intruder
who came into my home

My hand goes limp
the gun falls
as I back into the corner
and pray
for God to forgive me


© Copyright 2002 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-04-02 10:50 PM


JB,
What to say...

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2 posted 2002-04-03 12:56 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, I am sure so many can relate to this kind of grief and tension in moments like these everyday, my heart goes out to them all affected by supposed crimes like these! (sigh) I have nothing more to say except this is outstanding and heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
3 posted 2002-04-03 05:54 PM


This isn't your usual kind of message.

Each choice you make comes with responsibility. I’m sorry that anyone has to live with this kind of “choice”. But, the intruder also made a choice.

Melton

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