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How Can I Describe
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How Can I Describe |
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Roger Leewright Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 28Beaverton, OR.USA |
How can I describe the the way the sun shines through your hair unto your face.... Or how the wind makes your cheeks blush with the color of wine... How can I describe how my reflection shines so iridescently in your eyes.... Or how graceful your body moves to the rhythm of an UN-heard melody.... How can I describe the sweet aroma drifting back to me as I follow quietly behind..... Or the pain I feel when tears fall slowly from your face to be mixed discretely in the rain..... How can I describe the tenderness in your soft voice as it coaxes my complete attention.... Or how you make love to the very essence of the man that I am.... How can I describe this feeling of being alive...... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Roger, I like this is was very soft and sensual. You need to check your spelling and I believe Discretely (separate) should have been Discreetly (prudent). Other thean that it was good. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Roger: It is very hard to describe the wonderful feelings you get when you are in love. Your words are very tender and flow beautifully. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I would say you have described it perfectly...This is incredibly tender and filled with love...I love it!!!**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we're all so happy for you and all wish for the greatest joy to come to you forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Roger, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Roger! Wonderful feelings coming through on this one! Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahhhhh.....sighing deeply. Lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, Roger, i think you just did!! and very well, might i add! nice job!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ditto what Doreen (who often beats me to the punch) said! Wonderful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Roger Such a beautiful, romantic picture you have painted here. So very much enjoyed by this reader. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep trying, I could read some more.... |
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