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Just a different day........ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 She sat with empty wishes Scattered on the floor Listened to the walls wonder why He doesn’t come ‘round any more Broken dreams echo from the corners They too, miss him so much She just stares at hisfreeze~framed smile Pictures of once upon a time, touch Expressionless tears fall with no sound Knowing she feels what they can’t convey It’s the same ‘ole heartache Just a different day….. ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I too know this kind of heartache so well and I dream of finding stillness of heart and a way to make all my dreams come true and make each day like a holiday! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
She sat with empty wishes Scattered on the floor Listened to the walls wonder why He doesn’t come ‘round any more If it helps any, knowing why doesn't really make it any easier. Just my experience. Now that's funny!!! Cheer up...I hear it's gonna rain! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
always, thank you sweet Noah  Cowboy, yes, I'm hearing whispers of rain this weekend I do hope so... and yeah, I'm thinkin the why of it, would probably just hurt more than the not knowing. thank you |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
beautiful and melancholy. I was also left wondering why he doesn't come around anymore. you made me feel her loss as if it had been mine once. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Your tears do have sound, because I hear them. (((hugs)))me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
another beauty from your hand Sea, thanks for sharing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It’s the same ‘ole heartache Just a different day….." You've captured this feeling of longing perfectly Susan ... a very emotive piece, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Susan, wow, you have said this too well. Same old day, more sadness, no answers. I still ask why, too. Peace Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
knowing why? Hmmm... the why so often makes little sense to us..and if it is told..it often seems it makes no sense to us and perfect sense to them.... nicely done my friend... and a hug to you for your day |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
they run together, days like lovers holding hands look forward to the new ones |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Oooooh, tears are memories to be caught, held, felt, shared~ I'll catch !  *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
dry your salty tears look up and find a new love walk into my arms Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, once again your beautiful words grace these pages of blue...this is a really wonderful heartfelt write sweetie...i felt your pain and i know the soundless tears you speak of. but remember tomorrow is another day and i hope you find your sunshine again soon. hugs to you my sweet friend! love ya amy "you can't stop |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Sometimes, the rain sounds differently if you listen with the soul. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"It's the same ole heartache just a different day." James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, I think we’ve all sat with our empty wishes surrounding us. Such a soft and tender write of the hearts longing Susan. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...hey Sue!!!! Wow oh Wow oh Wow!!! Love the poem...and your graphics are perfect for the poem.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Broken dreams echo from the corners They too, miss him so much She just stares at hisfreeze~framed smile Pictures of once upon a time, touch Beautifully expressed, Sue.... Sensitively and soulfully written.  ~dreamy hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Time...it takes a lot of time. And the more rainy days the less time it takes. |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
I Feel for you Friend, I can feel your pain in this. I hope you Only the best. Cas- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so sad, and so like me |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Amazing |
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