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Love's Sad Lullabies
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Love's Sad Lullabies |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Burden carried, every last stone Not be married, remain alone The task taken, unbearable weight Love forsaken, before the gate. A vision held, is growing dim Of love once felt, of her and him Two hearts in beat, once then entwined A love truly sweet, as ever did find. Lonely lost thought, once felt so strong Gently once sought, eternity of song Left to wander, in feelings of two Nightly ponder, this search for you. What then it was...no longer to be Love’s gentle buzz, of flying bee Lost in a place, truth with no lies Tears in my face, as one heart cries. Turning away, not able to say of what once was, no longer will stay Left with a tear, falling from eyes as I sing dear, sad lullabies Sorry Mushy....I changed my mind...(I told her I wasn't going to post a poem today) [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-31-2002 06:51 PM).] |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
oooooo...a death in the heart...owie Chivalry is not dead. I saw it coughing up lung butter last night, but it was still alive. I think it has parvo. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy I forgive you, this is an absolutely fabulous piece from you. YOU as I’ve mentioned maybe one or twice are an absolutely fabulous writer. The softness of this the gentle dying of the love is so incredibly sadly sweet it really tugs at my hearts string. YOU have written an utterly utterly beautiful poem and I love it. Excellent writing darling boy As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Seems sad for you, sir Barry. But touching my heat, as always. "Lonely lost thought, once felt strong Gently sought, an eternity of song Left to wander, in feelings of two Nightly ponder, this search for you." Were you peeking in my room last night?? Peace Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Glad you changed your mind. Excellent write! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s..I am at aloss of words today in responses..so I am just enjoying the read thanks M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed so much today Barry! Happy Easter to you and yours. ~Bunny Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is so very sad, I have never actually felt this kind of experience but I can still feel for many who experience this, for I would be heartbroken too if I had to endure this kind of rejection just when it feels the gates of eternity will open ajar! (sigh) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much and wish you the happiest Easter! (big chocolate bunny hugs) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A vision once held, is growing dim Of love once felt, of her and of him Two hearts in beat, once entwined A love truly sweet, as ever did find. Beautifully expressed, Barry  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Barry, another beautifully written poem! Love the rhyming pattern!  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well expressed, I relate very much to this~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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