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Contradiction of Feel
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Contradiction of Feel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Contradiction of Feel I feel the tension, the tautness of face, the lack of sleep, the twitch of eye, as worry begins to take hold, my body controlled by some unseen force. I have only my words, constricted, anxious in wait, some say, expressing better than ever in a non-rhyming way. But... In the course of a day, the only pleasure derived is from thoughts of you, and even in their worst moments, they were some of the best for me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, You see you never know what's under the rock.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I do like this style from you, Maureen. Captures the condradiction well! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friedn, my heart goes out to how you feel but alwways hold thes ememories close and look up to the best to come always for you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I feel the tension, the tautness of face, the lack of sleep, the twitch of eye, as worry begins to take hold, my body controlled by some unseen force. I liked the poem a lot, Maureen. It reminds of my feelings about my cancer...  especially the part about being controlled by an unseen force... Isn't it interesting how poems can have many meanings?....  ~hugggssss~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes even in the worst moments comes some of the best treasures...for all who care, I would say! Very nicely done! As usual! |
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