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Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625
FL, USA

0 posted 2002-03-30 08:41 PM


Out of breath - inspired by Kethry’s poem, “Breathe me in”

I'm out of breath when I'm with you
For making love is all we do
O my, please come to me once more
Let's practice what we both adore.

A little kiss; a little touch
So tenderly we love, as such
And let our spark become red hot
With sudden flames, to fire our rot.

And then, again, come! Capture me!
Deep, deep within your ecstasy
For there is nothing short of death
That stops my being out of breath

So let me pant and give my all
For loving you is now my call.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
March 30, 3003

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-03-30 08:46 PM


WoooooW!
Smokin!
Great Newell, ThisDiamond

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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2 posted 2002-03-30 08:54 PM


Thank you, ThisDiamond, for your smokin' words. Wheee!

((ThisDiamond))
-newell

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Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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3 posted 2002-03-30 09:53 PM


Kool poem, Newell....beautifully and sensually written

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-03-30 10:36 PM


Thank you, Lyra. Glad you liked.

((Lyra))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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