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0 posted 2002-03-30 07:18 PM


Broken trust lay shattered on the ground
and I cried when I realised it was over
I didn't know his manipulations and lies would leave me broken and unsure
I didn't know I'd have difficulty believing you when you say you'll never leave
I thought I'd be able to love like I'd never been hurt
But it turned out I'd been scarred beyond healing
And now I struggle to find a way to
explain my insecurities and why I have
difficulty believing when you say you love me and will never leave me broken
I struggle to explain my paranoia... to myself most of all
I have no words to tell you that I'm like a wounded animal and need loving care
How much I want to trust you...
How very much I want the scars of the past to heal.

I am a geek!!

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-30 07:55 PM


Very intense and heartfelt write Rhonda.  It takes time for the soul to heal...in the meantime just write it out...and try to trust again.  Good work.  Hugs.  

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2002-03-30 08:06 PM


Rhonda, this is a wonderfully written though very sad beautiful poem. I adore your writing skills and your ability to express your soul. My heart breaks with you. I lovingly send you my heartfelt understanding, and deep love in God, and pray for your healing. God bless you.

((Rhonda))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-03-30 08:23 PM


It is so rare that we can pinpoint what is stirring inside us, and you have been so clear and heartfelt. Once you see it, you don't have to look anymore. ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-03-30 09:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Rhonda, this is so very sad but heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart too goes out to you for I know how hard it is to trust after such things like these happen but I promise you things will look up again and you'll find all the joy you deserve! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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