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Breaking Up (tanka)
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Breaking Up (tanka) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Our love has to end Please say we can still be friends It's not you, it's me This heart of mine needs to breathe In time you will love again [This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-17-2002 09:21 PM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, It's so hard to have to say those words. I hope everything is ok with you... *hugs* Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh love, I hope everything is OK, know that I love you so much and you will always be my Guinevere! (kiss on cheek) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I love you!  Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Joanna, this is a wonderful Tanka. I like the content and the form it perfect. Good work! Very good! ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hi Joanna, this is sad, but positive, like, well your mind is made up, great tanka, floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A sad, sweet, beautiful poem, Joanna... I hope that it isn't about anything personal....but if it is...here are some hugggsssss!!!!!!!  and a sweet little puppy to warm your heart!copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
this was great, but keep ur head high! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Joanna this is very well done, but, I hope you are okay and happy sweetie! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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