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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-17 09:00 PM

My quest is thee, fair maid in clear of night.
This heart doth beat in chest for soul in light.
Within my breast I do Ye keep from harm
For in warm bed, Ye sleep against my arm..

For thee must know the Drag does stalk thee now
as farm of seed wilt not feel sharp of plow.
Wilt thee not come and take mine own strong hand?
My dear so fair, at lair doth beast now land.

My shield, my sword now lie at my two feet
Of heart and will I wilst desire defeat.
Huge claws and teeth of maw doth you desire.
At night in dark of hole now breathes new fire.

A claw, a tooth, a sword and shield I wield
to slay the beast in night the quest I field.
The foe is near and now the fight is nigh
as beast does seek thee with most dark of eye.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-17-2002 09:11 PM).]

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

1 posted 2002-02-17 09:02 PM

oh wow...

how maginificent this was...

stunning...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-02-17 09:03 PM

ooooooooooo
I am thinkin there is a part two???
I hope there is! this is awesome

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-02-17 09:32 PM

Magnus, how lucky she is, you will slay the beast for her, My husband would probably just run.. no no no, just kidding,,, this is a very good write, nice flow to it, love this much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-17 09:58 PM

BRAVO!!! Is this a whole new adventure for Karbar the Dragon Slayer? (cheers in delight) Ooohhhhhh...this seems so exciting, more...more!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2002-02-17 10:37 PM

this thou verse
to me dost doest it

hehe

fine writing here!!

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

6 posted 2002-02-18 01:57 AM

Thou art the soul
Who cares to dare
To save the damsel
In dispair!!

Take a bow!!! Standing ovation from me!!

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

7 posted 2002-02-18 09:16 AM

Wonderful!

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

8 posted 2002-02-18 09:34 AM

In thy wield of sword and shield
yon dragon shall surely yield
for thy Will is greater than
the terror that he would span

for thy heart is truer gold
than his breath of fire bold

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-02-18 10:30 AM

Ah, the dragonslayer perfected. Love this style of yours.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-02-18 10:35 AM

Magnus,
Very good enjoyed.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-02-18 10:35 AM

And if thy need to story read
Hike thy pants and then proceed
to prose for the story I tell
of A slayer and dragon from hell.

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

12 posted 2002-02-18 12:13 PM

Barry; Do you know how excited I was to see this poem? I love these poems you write about slaying the dragon. Are you reviving Karbar? Wanda

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-02-18 12:28 PM

Wanda...not sure...but sort of getting the
urge to go fight a few dragons...mayhaps I
will...mayhaps... And YES...I do know you
have enjoyed them...

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