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Reservations For Two
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Reservations For Two |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Waterford crystal complimenting our lips. Not to be confused with glass houses or conjured notions of a distant reality. Like glass shelves reflect their place on the edge. It is merely the price I have paid for a good vintage wine, who keeps my glass half full, the one who makes my reservations for two. Cut into shapes reflecting the light coming together in rainbow streams. Parting between slow sips flushed by the warmth, draining me. When the party is over and I am left in the company of you, taking me to a place on the edge carefully dusted and rearrange. A private collection of precious momentos~ Seeping as we sift, through the constant shifting of time..... [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-30-2002 01:44 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Can't deny the memories...so why try! Nice write. Again.  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, you have a remarkable talent! i have read numerous of your poems now and am amazed each time! this is such a delightful piece you've penned here full of many memories, i just love the way you word things! incredible write! take care. amy "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-30-2002 06:05 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Crystal pure writing here. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is absolutely fantastic!!! I can't say how much I like this. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You know what? You are too wonderful to only have those memories edged in dust...now let's hear about those new ones you have been making..*w and I will share some of mine... hugss M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Memories will always offer us smiles from the past, just as I know you will find many more smiles to come that will always be reserved in your heart! (sigh) You always amaze me with your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A private collection of precious momentos~ Seeping as we sift, through the constant shifting of time..... Very beautiful, Lori. You use your words so very creatively... ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ You do pen your words nicely to paint a beautiful picture.....this is lovely and a keeper.... HUGGSSSSS~Greeneyes~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's right Larry, it goes back to the battle that isn't worth fighting!! Thanks~ Amy~ Thank you for your gracious reply, I don't know what to say except that I am flattered and I thank you sincerely. Kethry~ Something about the way the light relects on the crystal that caught my eye, I suppose that was my original thought here. Good to see you and thanks Kethry~ Sandra~ I've read this over and keep picking it apart, but after reading all the nice comments here I'm thinking I must have done something right! You're very sweet and I appreciate the read.....thanks. Maureen~ I was writing both ways here, one of which was being placed on the shelf, like being placed on a pedestal, the other was more about finding my place and being comfortable in it! Does that make sense? Thank you for always encouraging me. hugs Maur~ Noah~ Like your heartwarming comments always amaze me. You've a bright and wonderful light to share Noah. Thank you. Lyra~ I think in a way I am still writing in metaphors, I guess it's part of my style...if you could call it that!! You are always so sweet to read me, thank you for sharing your heart Lyra~Lauren~ I'm taking notes from some of the best! Thank you Lauren for coming around and reading me~ Hugs to you too~ [This message has been edited by Victoria (04-02-2002 10:00 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely done... read this twice before I could even begin to think about commenting... and will read it again as I am saving it for later... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Good morning cpat~ Thanks for the nice compliment, make my day and read me all you want. It's Monday again......uuuugh!Have a good one!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed the concepts of shelving and display perhaps the accent too up the stares to be there |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dark Stranger~ It's all in the way we see fit. Perhaps~ Thanks |
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