Open Poetry #19 |
If But Only For A Moment |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Darkness no longer surrounds me anymore With the closing of one I opened a new door Love found me, it healed me in shades of blue I didn't know love...until I saw you Now in the presence of your wonderful love I'm feeling the healing magic of our Lord above You are an Angel, calming my deepest fears You've helped to replace smiles with what once was tears Our times together may be short, but I hope not Still no matter...so many things to me you've taught What was once just empty space is no longer You've helped me to face my demons, making me stronger I pray that you and I shall forever last And one day all doubts I can cast Just pardon me for a moment or two If I'm still in awe of the wonderfulness of you I've never been touched by such beauty and grace You are the finest of wine, the softest of lace No matter if you were to leave tomorrow And I was consumed with such deep sorrow I'd know in my heart so true That I was loved by you ~*~ If but only for a moment "you can't stop |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amy this is a beautiful and heartfelt write. I hope the love you are feeling right now lasts forever! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I've never been touched by such beauty and grace You are the finest of wine, the softest of lace No matter if you were to leave tomorrow And I was consumed with such deep sorrow I'd know in my heart so true That I was loved by you ~*~ If but only for a moment" (smiles) This is soooooo sensitive and gorgeous, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) And I hope that this moment lasts a lifetime and true love will always fill your heart and battle all these demons and tears for you, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness! We all love you so much, sweet friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. You know darling heart, never have I been prouder of you than I am right now. You’ve grown so much as a person, and as a poet. YOUR writing is getting better and tighter every day. Not that your writing hasn’t always been excellent it has, but lately you’ve condensed it down to the essential spirit and it simply shines darling girl shines like a star. This poem is wonderful and so are you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pssssst! Don't tell Mushy that I agree with her comment about your poetry... But...it is true!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amy, *soft sigh* I'm glad your write reflects that things are going well for you, good on you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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