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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-03-29 07:27 AM

Oh love what hast thou done to me?
Impropable, thy seeming chill
when once such heat did perpetrate
thy game of hearts upon my will.

Oh love, what chocolate bittersweet
has found its way unto thy heart?
Though velvet melt did beckon me
thy action hast torn us apart.

Oh love, what falsity is this?
thou protestations be unclear
for words once penned with silken lies
have come to show me naught but fear.

Oh love, shall this our ending be
with coolest nod and shadowed eye?
No longer hast thou need of me
abandoned thus, I bid goodbye.

(just a litle attempt, do I have my thys and thous right?)

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (03-29-2002 07:28 AM).]

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2002-03-29 07:32 AM

Perfect ... enjoyed every line
Leaves me a little sad though

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-29 07:34 AM

Sandra,
You have everything right, a delight to read.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-03-29 07:49 AM

oh love what hast thou done to me
that left me as ribbons on wind
and as windsome waves on this sea..

enjoyed you here Sandra

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-03-29 08:07 AM

Beautiful Sandra...

*s

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-03-29 10:24 AM

Sandra I hope love will give you some sweet chocolate...James

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-03-29 10:29 AM

Oh love what hast thou done to me?
Impropable, thy seeming chill
when once such heat did perpetrate
thy game of hearts upon my will.

Oh Sandra this is a chilly one
that I can certainly relate to.

Thy lady writes so well.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-03-29 10:32 AM

simply beautiful Lady sandra..loved this one alot hon..hugss

~Vic

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2002-03-29 11:06 AM

Absolutely magnificent...this poem is written with a true cry from the heart and with amazing talent...I love it...**big hugs**
Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-03-29 11:44 AM

Sandra~

Lovely, just lovely! I love the mystery of the sea, and even more so in poems, you brought this to life....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-03-29 07:06 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, the spirit of Shakespeare's words shines in your gorgeous heart, you have the true heart of a classic poet bound to find true love to welcome you forever happily! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-03-29 08:53 PM

Oh love, shall this our ending be
with coolest nod and shadowed eye?
No longer hast thou need of me
abandoned thus, I bid goodbye.

Very lovely, Sandra...but very sad

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-03-29 09:09 PM

...Perfectly beautiful!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-03-29 11:04 PM

Sandra...coming from a thee and thou type of
guy....I thinks thee done well with thou
words of thy write...

Doth thee know art true of thee?

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2002-03-30 08:11 AM

Thanks everyone, and Barry, LOL.

Thou hast enabled me to further attempt such poetry

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

15 posted 2002-04-02 08:31 AM

Hi Sweetie,

WOW, awesome write, you conveyed much in this beauty,

Love, Cerenity

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2002-04-02 08:58 AM

CatalinaMoon~
By golly ... I like it !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

17 posted 2002-04-02 10:19 AM

Sandra,
Wow! I really like this. Great job...do some more.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

18 posted 2002-04-02 11:40 AM

say not thy goodbye
lift thy chin and smile brightly
love will come anew

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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