Open Poetry #19 |
Gambling |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Gambling I took a risk, and ventured out. There is a delicate beauty to loving you, a fine touch needed, each measured with sensitivity. I took a gamble, when I fell in love. How far is it, the distance to your heart? How many curves, till I reach the core? You make the possible, impossible. But I am here, with my crosses to bear, writing still, between the lines. I spin my thoughts, like a roulette wheel. Emotions rise to each memory won against the odds, a slight taste to tease the maybe out of me. I took a gamble, when I fell in love. Sometimes you win, sometimes, I lose. It's all in how you play the game... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Emotions rise to each memory won against the odds, a slight taste to tease the maybe out of me. ----------------- gotta love this one excellent lines Maureen |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is GR8! I love the gambling premise Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Rex..I have only gambled once in my life..well 6 days worth with Victoria in Las vegas, ..but doesn't love seem like a gamble today..if someone would have ever told me that, at this point in my life.... I would never have believed them. *s Hey "I", I love when you number me ~smiling a thanks M * so when do I get to see the 6'4" of you [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-29-2002 08:42 AM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I loved this, especially 'sometimes you win, sometimes I lose'. Nan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well we can't win the jackpot all the time, so I stick to the slot machines and wait to hear the bells ring. This was fantastic Maureen!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it too Maureen..and if i remember you were pretty lucky in Vegas ha..keep spinning that wheel..ha..hugss ~Victoria
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I took a gamble, when I fell in love. Sometimes you win, sometimes, I lose. It's all in how you play the game..." (smiles) This is so very true, sweet friend, sometimes we may not hit the jackpot right away, but there will always be a stroke of luck we bet upon that Roulette rack of chance that will offer us all our heart desires and everybody wins in the end! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
But I am here, with my crosses to bear, writing still, between the lines. That is the best news...I would certainly hate it if you weren't still here after all of that gambling! ~big comforting hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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