Open Poetry #19 |
Run Away Train |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Run Away Train emotional vehicle out of control freight transporting feelings carrying past and present metal sparking metal iron rails melt against iron will strength and weakness fuse full powered steam burning smell of heat hurried rapid movement at the greatest of speed dragging along unintended lines side by side "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"emotional vehicle out of control freight transporting feelings carrying past and present metal sparking metal iron rails melt against iron will strength and weakness fuse" wow! very well done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Helen, this is POWERFUL! I keep saying this is one of your best yet you keep getting better and better |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh... love this, sweet friend, I too think this is one of your best yet too, may this train come your way and offer great joy to the present and beyond for you! (kiss on cheek) This is superb, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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