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Lisann
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0 posted 2002-03-29 12:39 PM



A fire is cold
Compared to the fever
That rises each day in my head.
Day reaches for night,
And night becomes the day.
In that manner I pray,
God grant me the power
To reach for my glory
And the key mystically moves
With my will.....
If death be life,
As life is death
I yearn that coming
With all my might
Let me see the light
THat burns within me
For I cannot withstand the pain.

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1 posted 2002-03-29 01:22 AM


Lisann,
are you ok?
This sounds extremely sad,
I really hope it's just poetic expression.

have missed talking with you, by the way

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-03-29 07:00 AM


hugsss
M

that pain can be a hard one to cope with..just write it out...'til it releases  you.

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2002-03-29 08:57 AM


Some days it is hard to see that light at the end of the tunnel ... I know this feeling, and you've captured it with frightening clarity Lisann. Take care of you ... hope this little smilie I made, gives you a smile.



Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Lisann
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4 posted 2002-03-29 11:05 AM


hello everyone........Thanks for the concern.  This is written during a time of tremendous stress.  I have too much going on at once.   Sometimes, it is hard to keep my head above water.  But,  I know I will get through it.....I always do.  

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5 posted 2002-03-29 04:07 PM



Glad to see the disclaimer, little one....it HAS been a stressful few months, and the media only adds to our homegrown tension...you be well, and write more...the water only seems deep....but keep your nose above it, and you'll be fine!

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6 posted 2002-03-29 08:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lisann, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I understand all the pressure and strss you've been esxperiencing, but as Kit said, there is a liught at the end of every tunnel and I know with all my heart this will pass! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Lisann, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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