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Voiceless Vow
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Voiceless Vow |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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This love, in extreme held silent rages through my soul, violent ever consuming whispers sound poetic expression, profound Complete devotion, so intense deepest emotion, no pretense willing worship upon my knees with wanton wish just to appease Desire to be kept, in your eyes experience touch, without lies lifetime of love just under skin perpetual waiting within Surrender I, to voiceless vow Someday to give, what I can’t now ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope now your vow has been completed and now you are able to express your love for your sweetheart everyday happily! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this brought a smile to my face, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
...what I can't give...now.... wow... I was wondering when we were going to see a new one from you...I guess I ought to wonder more often if just that mere thought alone gets something like this from you... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I will refrain from replying as I wish due to good sense and the desire to continue posting here at Passions This is phenomenal in its basis! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear SEA, Too much passion, too much intensity. Too much poetry? Never! Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Well done, enjoyed. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, The passion is this piece is wonderfully expressed. It's about time you posted again. I've been waiting.  Now write another. (((hugs)))me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A lesson in patience...my least favorite topic! lol Sometimes, we wait and are rewarded. Sometimes, we just wait. Either way, makes for good poetry. Loved this, Susan. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan! I too have been waiting for you to post another...this one was well worth that wait. Hugs! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A poem intense in its meaning. Words that reached deep with purpose. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, this is so beautiful! wonderful writing from your pen indeed... i loved this! hugs to you girlie! love ya, amy "you can't stop |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This sounds like a very heart felt poem. And, a very good one, too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Somehow I don't ever see you as 'voiceless'~ BIG Huggies sweetie~ You speak volumes ! *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Desire to be kept, in your eyes experience touch, without lies =============================== Beautifully expressed. Sounds like a dream. ~Chrissy "No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved" |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Strong words, strong emotions. A beautiful write. alan |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, this an indian couple for sure...Two in tents. For a silence... it is deafening with implicit emotions. Wow! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* what a volume in your words....excellent as always Sea ((Hugs)) Charisma |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
What a vivid picture of wanting, someday. Thank you, SEA |
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