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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-03-28 03:44 PM

Falling down on the steps
of last days misery
that comes to attack my life
so I can be free
The lasting ignorance
of what I once became
has opend my soul again
to my lost ways.

Falling down hopelesly
as the after hour rings
one more step again
through the glass I can see
What more than blood is this
that whispers her name
falling upon myself
I can hardly breathe.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-28 05:33 PM

(big hugggssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and this misery you feel and I hope now it has passed and you now breathe with hope and promise again! (sigh) This is hauntingly wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-03-28 06:16 PM

Well, I read it. Three times. And I like it. And I can tell it's sad. But I don't have a clue what it's about. I guess I'm denser than most.

Nan

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-03-28 06:19 PM

Michael G,
Strong write, enjoyed

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2002-04-01 01:49 PM

Maybe U should have brought her phone # ???

Hee Hee.......

Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-04-02 03:37 PM

the steps follow that pattern. . . but, do we make them??

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-04-02 04:29 PM

Peace to you....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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