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Sapphire Shades |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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You are the green emerald in white golden settings. The deep blue shades of sapphire the contrasting colors in my opal ring. You are the link holding me together the polish that makes me shine. You are the tear drop diamond in the rough clasped around my neck. You are the rare jewel that I treasure the shimmering sparkle on my sea~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, "the polish that makes me shine" Absolutely love it! Cool.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lots and lots of reason why I like this one! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Larry and Sunshine~ I've had this song in my head all weekend that has nothing to do with jewelry~ 'Come back, come back, come to Jamaica, dontcha know I've made a big mistaica' I don't like admitting it but haven't we all been there a time or two...or three? Oh mercy me!! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
lissen here o yuh this poems got class! i liked it cuz that means i dont gotta go to class tomorrow i will just wear this poem on my forehead! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You go dude! I take it this will go with your new look? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ive always wanted an opal ring..its my brothers birthstone..mine is emerald..enjoyed this ms.serenade...nicely done... ~Vic |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...May I just say I LOVE THIS POEM!!... Thank you....hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - many thoughts here you write. Love it... BC |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Lori- this was...um...priceless |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may his love forever be the amulet you wear and be a priceless keepsake to last a lifetime! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Party song too! Fun.  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I love this Blue, so nice, jewels compared to a person, wonderful thoughts. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
 A real gem of a poem, Lori You are the tear drop diamond in the rough clasped around my neck. So very lovely! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Victoria~ Yes, the opal stone is a rainbow of colors that makes it hard to resist. Thank you for your hugs~ Nancy~ And may I just say, thank you for loving it. Huggers~ BC~ My thoughts are many, and ones that I shuffle far too often. Thank you Sir. Jeff~ I couldn't and wouldn't put a price on the way I feel, although it's cost me a few times. Nice to hear from you and thanks. Noah~ It is a keepsake indeed, like a hidden treasure that brings out the best part of me. I so appreciate your kindness. Larry~ Another verse in that song for ya 'I've got a big suspicion 'bout ammunition and I remember to always duck' Can't be too careful these days you know. Ok ok, I'll spare you. Floria~ Thank you for understanding my metaphor. It's always nice to see your name here. Madame C~ I don't want the perfect or the biggest diamond heck, I'm not wanting a diamond at all! (not to say I would turn it down) I just want to sparkle and shine in the right light. Thank you so much for reading Lyra~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is a really pretty gem Lori. I am a Topaz. I'm wondering what my poem should be like. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Blues--Lovely jewel of a poem! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Topaz is November right? Like the golden yellows that filter through the rays of sun. That is a pretty stone, how did I miss that? Thanks for reading! Martie~ Thanks for coming by,I appreciate it! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Don't you have music for this? *bump* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Glowing with perfection. Sandra |
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