Open Poetry #19 |
In Silent Prayer |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
In Silent Prayer oh Lord help me I am in need of your care slip your hand inside of mine let me know you are there I am lost at land I am lost at sea drowning in the air I breathe set my spirit free sleep upon sheets of stone no manna do I eat no path seems familiar I can not guide my feet I sit here quietly waiting no answers do I know place your hand upon my back point the way to go "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you! He will always hold your hand, sweet friend, may He forever be your guide and fill you with light whenever you need love the most! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Helen, this is a very, very beautiful prayer. I'm sure He will guide your footsteps as you ask. Just trust Him. ((Helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Helen...... Oh I can Honestly relate to this plea for help in time of deep emotional pain... God is there... His will for you remember ..... Don't fight it ... just listen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - from reading your poem I feel your hurt. I needed Him too, and it finally happened. Hang in there, it may take some time, but it will get better. Bill |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - from reading your poem I feel your hurt. I needed Him too, and it finally happened. Hang in there, it may take some time, but it will get better. Bill |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Hang in there babe..this poem was sad, but it will get better! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is when things seem loudest, that you need the silence most... listen to the silence, and you will hear... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Some very nice lines. Sets a nice mood and is expressed well. Enjoyed your poem very much. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hang in there...for your darkest hour can become much brighter, with hope and faith. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Listen ... He speaks to you ... inside. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
oh yes we all need courage and strength to go on sometimes..and he seems to always give it to us...hugsss ~Vic |
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