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Open Poetry #19

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JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-03-29 08:31 AM

At times I see the parting waves
laying flat across the desert crust
deceiving layers to uncaring eyes
promising water but delivering dust

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-03-29 08:44 AM

James,
Clever, enjoyed.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-03-29 03:10 PM

yes, very clever!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-29 08:17 PM

(smiles) This is a fabulous vision of an arroyo, sweet friend, I love it! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always detail nature at its finest! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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