Dining With Cannibalistic Pleasure

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Open Poetry #19

Dining With Cannibalistic Pleasure

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-03-27 02:03 PM

So the edge sinks
As words draw deeper the flesh
Soul lacks
but envies
And each drop spilled
Is not replaced with milked kindness
Mothered from breast of love
Nor saved without spoiling
In soured ways the agony
Let loose in each
Splat
Of
Drip

Serrations of sentence
Rip even old and toughened scars
To again bleed bright
Then in ugly puckered remembrance
Glare red eyed back when examined
Leaving marks
On back of retina
Not even time
Can completely ignore

So the edge sinks
Sharp whetted in quick sliver slicing
Leaving servings thin enough
To offer even you
A taste of
Essenced
Hunger

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

1 posted 2002-03-27 02:18 PM

ouch...double ouch, this one is so real and imagery powerful it actually hurts to read it....
wow

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

2 posted 2002-03-27 04:36 PM

Baron of beef, anyone?
Talk about edgy...
now I'm hungry...
for a little more poetry, please.

I'm always game for seconds...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-03-27 04:48 PM

Jellybeans... sorry if it was painful..just one of those things that had to come out for no particular reason..

Soliel: Hungry for seconds are you? My my...
usually one dose of reading me is enough for a person.

Thanks to the both of you for commenting and I'll see if there is any more edgy left for seconds Soliel.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-27 09:35 PM

(sigh) Wow, this is excellent, sweet friend, I too could feel the aches reading this poem as if my eyes were bloodshot and those thoughts left scars on me! (big hugggssssss) You are a true wizard of expression, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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