Open Poetry #19 |
Soddy Thought 1876 |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Soddy Thought 1876 Our days wend busier when dust blows half our time encompasses hands before eyes keeping grit out, and woe that wifely sort, who dusts and dusts the dust that grins under her feet, and in her mouth.... quick, quick, come with me to the water's fall and in a moment's drench we shall be reborn |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
would be a chill drench this day.. nicely done my friend..captures the elemental struggle as well as the internal that comes from surviving. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and in a moment's drench we shall be reborn" I love that part! soddy series...none better. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved the rush! Nice one Sunshine~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I think you really must have been there, you know so much. Love the sensitive look you give us. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I am so glad I didn't live then and there. When I hear the stories I wonder at their strength of character and adventurous spirit. Nan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I just love the wonderful views of the ages you reflect in your words, sweet friend, I too always feel that sensation of miraculous beauty when I eye a waterfall, it always seems to elp me rejuvenate when I need to relax! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
quick, quick, come with me to the water's fall and in a moment's drench we shall be reborn" rebirth, has a symbol of meaning....I like this, and the style too... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
what a vivid look back!!!! I know this dust... comes from a first house made of the earth they will farm... and the sands of time unleashed. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Was that an invitation to a bath? LOL Just wondering...love this series. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and woe that wifely sort, who dusts and dusts the dust that grins under her feet, and in her mouth.... However much I may love the words... That was NOT one of my ancestors! LOL This is beautiful, Sunshine... I enjoyed very much. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea! You KNOW how much I love the Soddy Series, and this quick deep thought is yet another one for me to treasure! I think I lived before, back then...seems so real to me. Well done my sweet friend! Hugs!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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