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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-03-25 05:38 PM

Lips of sunset kisses trade winds' goodbye
ships of fools upon tides of lullabies
unanchored moments adrift in the night
whispers navigate in seas of moonlight
clinging to seaweed upon a wistful branch
a tear still hoping for another chance
soft echoes tangled in nets of debris
washed away driftwood haunting the sea
a coral heart filled with treasures of love
lost without a trace like scent of foxglove
tucked away somewhere in a surreal dream
castaway thoughts and shipwrecked moonbeams
thoughts tease at the mention of your name
but love was the only sea creature to blame

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-25-2002 05:39 PM).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-03-25 05:55 PM

Victoria darling girl this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect

Truly sensational writing, beauty is always welcome darling girl and YOU bring so much of it

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-03-25 06:11 PM

Hello Victoria

This was absolutely stunning, I loved it!

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-03-25 06:25 PM

a sensual treat, as only you are capable of
serving...a master chef of poetic passion.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-25 07:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever be acastaway in his loves paradise and may your whispers forever reach his heart and may he embrace you with happiness and trust! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-03-25 07:33 PM

Of course, you mention of the sea immediately drew me in.

Just lovely, Victoria! *hugs*

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-03-25 08:09 PM

Hey, we are on the same island, I think. LOL
Yours sounds a bit prettier though.
Sigh..I wish I could really go, and not alone,either!
Sandra

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2002-03-25 08:31 PM

Poor girl...sounds like you are fit to be tide! Sometimes you just have to wave goodbye and write it off as a tidal loss. Your treasure chest will be in the right hands one day...I'm sorry!!!!! You got me feeling nautical with the clever way you combined all of those phrases...at least I refrained from using naval!

Canoe forgive me for being so dinghy??

It really is a beautiful piece...

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-03-25 09:06 PM

a tear still hoping for another chance
soft echoes tangled in nets of debris
washed away driftwood haunting the sea
a coral heart filled with treasures of love

Beautiful words, Victoria

~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-03-25 09:16 PM

a coral heart filled with treasures of love

That line conjured up images in shallow water. I don't mean to say love is shallow, I liked the idea of swimming alongside the coral while the sun shines through, like being inside out! I'm not making much sense but I like the picture I am seeing in my mind.

Nice Victoria!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-03-25 09:16 PM

tucked away somewhere in a surreal dream
castaway thoughts and shipwrecked moonbeams
thoughts tease at the mention of your name
but love was the only sea creature to blame
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Beautiful Victoria...enjoyed so much tonight!
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-03-25 09:47 PM

~V~

I love how you do these, they are so soft and so real...

HUGSSS

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-03-25 10:06 PM

Victoria, a wonderful play on words; not as silly as Balladeer's of course, but delightful all the same!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2002-03-25 10:13 PM

thank you guys and gals..nice to hear from all of you

~Victoria

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