Open Poetry #19 |
. . . Lips meeting lips |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
mouth to ear promise eye to eye pledging of love my troth in a kiss Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (03-25-2002 04:03 PM).] |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
tender to thine ear lashes touching lashes kiss a pledge ever kept |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a pledge ever kept with words, quiet, unspoken without a language --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
without a language butterfly kisses given my heart lost to you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Silence telling of kisses inner dwelling Breath of life melding Nicely done Interloper [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-25-2002 05:01 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Stirred deliciously with promised kiss from your lips anticipating~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Lips whisper gold vows Eyes tear up with compassion Revealing loves trust (smiles) This is such a beautiful declaration of love to your sweetheart, sweet friend, your gorgeous senryus always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love,the magic kiss makes all else unimportant I wish I had some Sorry, I'm just down there in the blues again. I like the way you do these little mini treasures. Sandra |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice job, 'loper, but you misspelled tooth |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~sigh~ I love how you do these.... you take one moment and turn it into a wish of time....lovely!! Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-25-2002 10:01 PM).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
feather light touching soft meeting, greeting, then meld our lips, hearts and souls |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you know I love this! Kissing can be so sensual! enjoyed my friend |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Interloper...A rare touch of dew upon the lips...this kiss you wrote of. Sensuality at its best in three short lines. ***Ivy Rose |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this be your promise creation of tomorrow bestowed by a kiss |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! A strong promise in your kiss. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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