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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-03-25 01:11 PM


She moves, my Love, in waves of perfect Auburn Moonlight.
Waves that flicker and touch my soul like fire,
That touh my body with hands of softest silence.
She moves in ways that quicken my beating heart,
Sharing with me her lines of love, always spoken
In her voice, that Siren's voice that gives our love words.

My heart hears her voice, as my eyes feel her words
Of dancing in ecstasy beneath our moonlight.
Here, we share the secrets of love, always and never spoken.
The meadows blaze for far and wide with our love's fire
As we two join together to become one heart.
Then, when comes the dawn, the echo of love's silence.

And, in the crystalline of that always fragile silence,
My lips part slowly to speak to her in lover's words.
To you, Dear One, to you I give this, my only heart.
Here, in our secret time, where sunlight meets moonlight,
Where cool of moon's ray gives way to heat of sun's fire,
I give to you my heart, and these words, still not spoken.

And when, Dear One, these words have been spoken,
Let there not come from your lips only silence;
But let there come from them the warmth of love's fire.
Told in your most delicate and passionate words.
Shared with me now as were shared with me in moonlight,
Giving to me the fullest measure of your heart.

Then, Dear One, when we give to the other our heart,
Let our word be the only one that remains spoken.
Let our love be forever heard in the Auburn Moonlight,
Dispelling forever that black and darkest silence
With the power of our deep and passionate words;
Setting the trees of that forest bright with our fire.

And when we feel, Dear One, when we feel that fire,
It will indeed make of our lives one truest heart.
A love that cannot be expressed in these mere words.
A love that cannot by spoiled lips yet be spoken.
But, a love that is felt by us in our silence
Here now, Dear One, here in our Auburn Moonlight.

And, in our Auburn Moonlight, touched by love's new fire,
There will forever be our silence, heard by our one true heart,
Now that love can be spoken by feelings more powerful than words.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

© Copyright 2002 Moonlight Romeo - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-25 01:24 PM


Wow...
now this is poetry in motion!
you have such a beautiful way of
expressing your love...every line in
this truly divine and left me with
a huge smile! thank you for sharing
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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2 posted 2002-03-25 01:28 PM


Well, hello you amazing poet, you.

I think this is the longest I've ever read from you. Its full of passion, sincerity, and love. Those are the best features in your work.

enjoyed.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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3 posted 2002-03-25 01:47 PM


Moonlight Romeo,

       This is just stunning! You made me sigh, and smile. I loveeeee romance and this poem is full of it.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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4 posted 2002-03-25 05:37 PM


Wow, you seemed to have found the words in abundance thatI could not, and left "Unspoken"...really cool write Romeo!
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5 posted 2002-03-25 11:22 PM


"She moves, my Love, in waves of perfect Auburn Moonlight.
Waves that flicker and touch my soul like fire,"


that is just the prettiest way of saying how she touches you.... I like that a great deal

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6 posted 2002-03-25 11:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful way to descrive how you feel just touching her heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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