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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-03-25 11:51 AM

There was only me talking,
Talking of times and places,
Places where we had once gone,
Gone then are her soft spoke words,
Words lost mid sentence spoken,
Spoken no more she’s silent,
Silent for the long moments,
Moments where I reflect back,
Back to other times we’d talk,
Talk of the future coming,
Coming now to the pausing,
Pausing to think she’s still there.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (03-25-2002 01:01 PM).]

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2002-03-25 12:50 PM

beautiful write Sir.....

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-03-25 01:32 PM

This is as excellent as your writing always is to me. I hope you're well, Sir.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2002-03-25 01:43 PM

Thank you, Zinsser,
For your kind words.

Thank you, Temptress,
I am well, I am touched by your concern,
It is others close to me that illness touches.

Gloom

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2002-03-25 01:54 PM

Gloom,

beautiful writing! the memories sometimes
make it more difficult but sometimes they
bring a comfort...regardless wonderful
write...good to see you. take care.

amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-03-25 03:46 PM

Very nice writing gloom, sorry of the illness of one close to you. That is always difficult. Now this style of using the last word for the first. I have a friend that does this and I had not seen it before, very nice, different. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-03-25 07:30 PM

I always enjoy, the way you piece your poems together in your own style...
Understanding your feelings...I can only offer you a hug and remind you that I am here for you...
As Always
M

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