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Where in the world? |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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*Here's something a bit different from my usual style of writing, hope you all like it* Where in the world Is my mr. right? Where would I find him If I were to take flight? Is he over in Tennessee Searching for little ol' me? Maybe, If I'm really lucky I'll find him in Kentucky Possibly he's in my birthplace of New York Eating like a caveman without a knife and fork Well, I heard from a little birdie She said I should check New Jersey Oh love of my life, are you in Virginia? If you're my prize, how can I win ya? Is mr. right in Idaho? Exporting the potatoes that grow? Is he clothes shopping in Mississippi Will he like my wardrobe or is he a hippie? Is he a federal worked in Ft Lauderdale? I bet he delivers Balladeer's mail He might be a doctor says my prediction In Noah's town of Arvada, writing prescriptions Is he neighbors with catalinamoon in Alaska? The right person could've just walked right past ya I wonder, and I wonder some more, now I leave it to fate but what if he's not even in the united states? My prince might be in France Longing to shower me with romance Could he be in Canada near my friend Nancy Lee? If that's so, then girl, hook him up with me! Is he in England, near my darling girl "Mushy"? Modeling CK briefs with his cute tushy? Worst case senerio- He's married but wants a divorce So I continue to wait and let destiny run its course [This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-24-2002 11:11 PM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a cute, creative write...I like this style from you.  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Where, oh where, is your Mister Right? Where is that silly guy tonight? I hope he's not in Pakistan Hiding out from Uncle Sam.. He better not be in Tahiti Living with another sweetie. In Egypt then? Well, that's no joy Cause you don't need a mummy's boy! In China looking for some nookie With a little fortune cookie? Window shopping in Amsterdam? With Mary having a little lamb? Someone said he was in Hoboken But I think that they were jokin'. I hope he's not a man from Venus.. I heard they don't have a ....  !!Where, oh where, is Mr. Right? RosePetal needs her man tonight!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very cute, Joanna... but I think he's hiding out in Kalamazoo under Lyra's deck with a cache of acorns, just for you  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Aww...I love it! The rhymes were great! Love, Bonnie |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is a very cute poem Joanna. I like that style on you, you wear it well. And I am cracking up over Balladeer’s poem. Only he could come up with that response!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This is just too cute! I love the style!! Thanks for the read! Hopelessly in love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I ask myself the same thing every day |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Joanna, very cute indeed...this was just what i needed to read, very light and refreshing. i thank you! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Joanna this is so sweet, so kool.. truly nice. I loved it so much.. I liked the reference to baladeer and I loved the one in England. great work. floria Yep baladeer, you got me falling off my chair again.. Floria |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, This was soooooo cute I really liked it, you had me giggling  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this Singing Sparrow right here loves you so much and dreams of being the love of your life! (kisses) I love you sweetie, you are the girl of my dreams always, this is a wonderful write, I love you love! (kiss kiss)  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Joanna! I miss you sooo much! Yes, you come up here and visit me and I'll fix you up with a guy you can't resist!  Hoping to be back online soon on my own puter again...I miss you and everyone so darn much! Hugs sweetie! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Joanna~ I love this, its perfect... let us know where you find Mr Right.. Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-25-2002 09:45 PM).] |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Rose, Much enjoyed. Very cute, lighthearted, and creative. ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pssssst!!!....Over here!!! I know where he is... Way down south in Kangaroo land....waiting to put you in his pouch.... Joanna, this style suits you well... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joanna, You may find this very hard, But he might be in your back yard. And the one you want so dear, May in face be very near. And when you give up on your plan, Surprise, right there will be your man. It's a mysterious fact of life, Next thing you know...you're a wife. Excellent poem and now all that is required is a little patience. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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