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Underneath The Stairs
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Underneath The Stairs |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
HI everyone... The story behind, is that I live in a builting with alot of floors in it, and one morning when I was on my way to school. I saw this little girl, who came running crying down the stairs, with her mother screaming at her, and she practicly ran down underneath the stairs. So that's where the whole Idea for this song came from...I hope you will enjoy it... Best Wishes, Brian. "Underneath the Stairs" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved V1: Underneath the stairs Is where she keeps all her secrets She got a world of her own Where she leaves the things she regrets A place where she feels at home Where she'll never feel alone... V2: Underneath the stairs Is where she paints her memories Where she can be anything Where her lost soul can find relief Whenever the line's too thin Where she is allowed to sin... C: She feels like a broken bottle, That splinters against wall. Offen she wonders if somone, Will catch her if she might fall. But she is always in denial, 'Cause there is only one place where, She doesn't feel hurt or scared... Underneath the stairs. V3: Underneath the stairs Is where she dream herself away From the troubles in her heart Oh, how she wish that she could stay So she'd never fall apart Just stay underneath the stairs... C: She feels like a broken bottle, That splinters against wall. Offen she wonders if somone, Will catch her if she might fall. But she is always in denial, 'Cause there is only one place where, She doesn't feel hurt or scared... Underneath the stairs. Tag: 'Cause there is only one place where, She doesn't feel hurt or scared... Underneath the stairs. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Brian, this is soooooo heatbreaking, my heart cries out to this poor little girl and the angst she feels from her mother, I pray that soon she will find the comfort and heart to escape from that place underneath the stairs and find her place underneath the rainbow where all her hopes and dreams will come true! (big huggsssssss) My heart and prayers are with her, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hey Noah Eaton, Thanks for taking time to read this, and I'm glad that you like it...I also have some music for it...Think I'll post it sometime later, Thanks again. Best Wishes, Brian. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good write on a sad subject. I do hope the child is not being abused, but that Mom just had a very bad day...it's a terrible thing when that last nerve is stepped on... |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi Sunshine, Thanks for stopping by and giving your opinion. I truly hope so too, that, that little girl isn't being abused!!! But since that day, i haven't seen that happening, Thanks God for that...Well, anyways thanks again. Best Wishes, Brian. [This message has been edited by Hallucination (03-24-2002 06:23 PM).] |
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