Open Poetry #19 |
Fisherman |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Fisherman The fish like silver wishes flash behind the rock, a slither of a dance. More then this dream a fisherman’s chance to contemplate the day. Beyond the place of pool's cold this poet told of a fisherman's strong and steady hold and what she thought to spin of gold was a fiber pure and unafraid made from peace and love. So from her chair she cast with pole and filament naught a line of words with nimble fingers fast across a keyboard the letters sought to find connection in this pool vast the fisherman's heart was caught. ----- 11-99 |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is very picturesque--I enjoyed the visuals your words brought to my mind. Very nicely done. sky |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember this....and so glad to see it again. I am so very glad that smiles are recycle-able... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I'm so happy to read this, your gorgeous words always have us fishing for insporation and smiles! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely breathtaking and peaceful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Excellent write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Martie...I love fishing...and this seems to be a very favorable way of fishing...Surely you will catch the prize of the day with your poetic pole and hook... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
and what she thought to spin of gold was a fiber pure and unafraid made from peace and love. I love your poetry, Martie....hook, line and sinker! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"a line of words with nimble fingers fast across a keyboard the letters sought" I like this, you caught me hook, line and sinker. floria Floria |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You captured the heart alright, as only you can but this brought to mind a pretty cute fisher"woman" I have a picture of. ~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~ |
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