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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-03-24 01:53 PM



Moments Of Mellow Making

~*Marge Tindal*~

In moments of mellow-making
all the good lines are gone
So I resort to 'I love you'
as the night turns to dawn
Gently you turn to me saying
'Me too'~

Moments of mellow-making
bring my heart into dawning view
I am seasoned in sunshiny sprinkles of love
on this beautiful Spring morning with you~
'Good morning, babe'~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-24 01:55 PM


I love you are the best words I can think of to say. and this was wonderful Marge. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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2 posted 2002-03-24 01:58 PM


Marge

Those three words are always the best!  Hugs!

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3 posted 2002-03-24 02:01 PM


Yes!  I can only imagine the smile in your eyes.  
Love the contentment in this.
Enjoyed your poem so much Marge~
Happy Sunday to you.

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4 posted 2002-03-24 02:04 PM


I love the simple, day to day love of this, Marge!
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5 posted 2002-03-24 03:04 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart, this is utterly perfect the simplicity the elegance and the grace this is written with is perfectly delicious. I love it utterly but you knew that didn’t you. Wonderful writing as always


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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6 posted 2002-03-24 04:25 PM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2002-03-24 05:27 PM


Marge, these are the best words a person can hear. Your happiness shows in everything you write. And, I am happy for you.
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8 posted 2002-03-24 07:13 PM


I do like the soft and tender touch of this
Marge...very much so..

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-03-25 08:51 AM


*Thank you all soooooo much~
It's a GREAT day to be in love~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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10 posted 2002-03-25 07:52 PM


Dang you're good when you're happy!

Cor

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-03-29 10:03 AM


Corinne~
Dang !  That's just what HE says !
Tee-Hee-Hee !
Love ya' gal~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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