Open Poetry #19 |
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Moments Of Mellow Making |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Moments Of Mellow Making ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() In moments of mellow-making all the good lines are gone So I resort to 'I love you' as the night turns to dawn Gently you turn to me saying 'Me too'~ Moments of mellow-making bring my heart into dawning view I am seasoned in sunshiny sprinkles of love on this beautiful Spring morning with you~ 'Good morning, babe'~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I love you are the best words I can think of to say. and this was wonderful Marge. floria Floria |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge Those three words are always the best! Hugs! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yes! I can only imagine the smile in your eyes. Love the contentment in this. Enjoyed your poem so much Marge~ Happy Sunday to you. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I love the simple, day to day love of this, Marge! |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, this is utterly perfect the simplicity the elegance and the grace this is written with is perfectly delicious. I love it utterly but you knew that didn’t you. Wonderful writing as always ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, these are the best words a person can hear. Your happiness shows in everything you write. And, I am happy for you. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do like the soft and tender touch of this Marge...very much so.. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thank you all soooooo much~ It's a GREAT day to be in love~ ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dang you're good when you're happy! Cor |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Dang ! That's just what HE says ! ![]() Tee-Hee-Hee ! Love ya' gal~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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