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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Lost vintage, strolls in memories Too vacant to recall Yet haunting and lilting- A splash against a writhing soul. Oh, destitution- A hope never received That twists in my belly This never ending ache of mourne For time, for love Loss of honor and indignation. So, once, a passion curled Seducing tomarrow in glory Not felt, forever yearned Yet slid away in time's cruel passing. Awaking to a morn, alike all others To pass the day in respites play Waiting for something more An act in vain. For this world closes Each night, the click of a light Passing living off as adventure Giving back beauty wrinkles of decay. The earning of age, whispers In solemn, curtailed regime To wisen those who fight hardest 'Til living is something obscene. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...To wisen those who fight hardest... A bold line, in a sea of richness. This place has been my own home at times, as I reflect on where I need to be, and fly. Much love to you for your life. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
amusemi, I see your not amused. Enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Each night, the click of a light Passing living off as adventure Giving back beauty wrinkles of decay. The earning of age, whispers In solemn, curtailed regime To wisen those who fight hardest 'Til living is something obscene." Wow there is just so much in here, so many messages, powerful. great work. floria Floria |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
The depth of emotion here is clearly felt Amusemi...very well written...the flow ebbed in all the right places...well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! This is soooooo very powerful, sweet friend, may you always follow your heart and embrace the light of His lighthouse and you will always know where you need to be and where you are going and find all the happiness and answers your golden heart deserves! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is powerfully honest and poignant! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
ThisDiamond-Thank you, and much love to yours as well!! Seymour Tabin-Awe shucks...I'm just venting! strbbux-Thankyou for the compliment...from you this is incredible praise. Dulcinea-Insomnia is sometimes the greates tool for poetry. Thanks for reading...I was worried about the flow BTW. Just believe... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Noah-You, too, are a sweet friend. Sometimes keeping that faith is the hardest thing one ever does! You are a dear...you know. |
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