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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Unspoken Incapable of carving or articulating the emotions I aspire to express- How do you define a heart-sigh through wisdom more intense than words are gifted to convey? How do you paint the reflection of a heart reborn and fulsome, amid a radiant tenderness to which letters cannot be bent? How do you divide the tears of pleasure breaking threads of doubt, or declare the syllabic nuance of a language never learned? I’ve naught communication commendable or capable by which to truly declare inspiring sacred trusts ~~so unutterable~~ ~~go unspoken~~ Eternally lingering on broken fragments of countless imaginings forgotten in sleep. ~~for my special friend, love you always~~ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I liked it it decides similar emotions I sometimes have  I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello. I enjoyed this write so much. It is full and luscious, and even though unspoken...said volumes. Very well done. ThisDiamond |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
How do you define a heart-sigh through wisdom more intense than words are gifted to convey lovely words Dulcie..yes sometimes there are no words to speak what you feel..hugs ~Victoria~
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very beautiful words for a special friend. I am sure they will enjoy the unspoken words... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know your friend is going to love this soooooooo much, you are a wonderful friend to us all! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a wonderful declaration of friendship! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dulcinea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dulcie darling girl as always you write these with such skill and beauty I really found this excellent poem wonderful. The gentle softness of a hearts whisper Well done darling girl, very very well done. This contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the flow is utterly utterly divine As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is always so tender and true. To shout it from the roof tops has to be one of the greatest feelings of all. This was such a poignant piece in more ways than one~ Every line drew a heavy sigh from me. So pretty Dulci~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Moon Dust: Thank you so much, I am glad you could empathize with this and glad you enjoyed it! ThisDiamond: Hello to you! I am glad that even in my feelbe attempt to say what is in my heart, you still heard it speaking, Thank you! Victoria: What can I say? Coming from you, even the simplist response is a huge compliment! Thanks GF! Magnus: They did indeed enjoy them very much, thank you for the thoughtful response! |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Noah: What can I say to you sweet, sweet poet! Yes, he loved the poem very much, thank you! You truly have a heart of gold, never lose it! Marsha: Dear sweet lady! Thank you! Nothing feels better than a response from the Mushy one as I am sure anyone here can attest to! Another golden heart I treasure here in Passions Lori: From someone I admire greatly, I am humbled by your thoughtfullness. I too enjoy your writings as I always have. They are always fresh, true, full of the warmth and tenderness that only a heart full of love can convey! I hear those ~~heart-sighs~~ emitting from you as well, THANK YOU! I do understand! BIG  |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Dulcy: as people gaze into romantic skies we are the two brightest stars shining. More than touched, i was floored by this perfectly written testament, but i know you will be there to pick me up, right? *smiles* jEFF |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh I like this! Very much so! Do not fear of being bruised by any critique on this...it holds so much, so gently! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
A beautiful and special tribute indeed! Some emotions are just so intense and deep that words can never do them justice...you captured this sentiment very well. Kat |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dulci, this is wonderful. "I’ve naught communication commendable or capable by which to truly declare inspiring sacred trusts" wonderful work. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the way you describe these emotions, Dulcinea... How do you paint the reflection of a heart reborn and fulsome, amid a radiant tenderness to which letters cannot be bent? Great job!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Jeff, with inspiration such as you, how can I not shine? And yes darling, I will be there to pick you up... Always!Sunshine, thank you so very much! I appreciate the "gentle" comment! Kat, It was a special day, one I am sure we both will remember always. I couldn't find the words I wanted to say to express what I was feeling, so I described the dilemna instead, thank you for your wonderful comments! ((HUG)) Thank you Floria, I appreciate the kind comments! Lyra, I am honored! Thank you so very much. Hope you are well, and holding your own! ((hugs)) |
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